I have picked Jakob's blog to comment on. On Jakob's first blog he gave a significant amount of support to what he was saying, by writing page numbers and giving the reader the connection with him and Jones and there similarity's. A piece of advice, don't write about that you have ADHD just write that Jones takes pills also do I you don't have to give that much information.

Your second blogpost had allot of evidence, even do it was a very short paragraph. It had quotes and page numbers on the book and it also showed, your point of view to what you think about lying but my only suggestion is that you redo it and don't delete words just add more to what you have so that you can have a good grade.

Overall I think Jakob you did a good job in your blog posts.